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Please exchange 4.3 and 4.4

From: Martin J. Duerst <duerst@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 17 Mar 2000 14:29:18 +0900
Message-Id: <4.2.0.58.J.20000317142629.035e0100@sh.w3.mag.keio.ac.jp>
To: www-p3p-public-comments@w3.org
The section sequence  in chapter 4 is confusing,
the presentation changes between bottom-up (primitive first)
and top-down (big datasets before the underlying base
data types). If 4.4 comes before 4.3, the chapter
will be much improved and easier to read.

Regards,   Martin.

#-#-#  Martin J. Du"rst, I18N Activity Lead, World Wide Web Consortium
#-#-#  mailto:duerst@w3.org   http://www.w3.org/People/D%C3%BCrst
Received on Friday, 17 March 2000 00:29:07 GMT

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