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Editorial Modifications (April 4, 2000 Draft)

From: Thomas Hubbard <hubbard@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 05 Apr 2000 14:56:50 -0400
Message-ID: <38EB8C72.21A291C0@w3.org>
To: www-p3p-public-comments@w3.org
1) Section 3.2.1

Confusing language: 

In the Policy element "entity" is listed as a mandatory attribute, in
the DTD entity is an element not an attribute.

2) Section 3.2.1 [11]
[remedies] is not a direct decedent of policy but rather a decedent of
[disputes] which is a decedent of [disputes-group]

3) 3.3.1 the interactive category is listed more then once.

tom.
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