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From: Al Gilman <Alfred.S.Gilman@IEEE.org>
Date: Mon, 18 Dec 2006 21:07:51 -0500
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Reference:
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-InkML-20061023

1. orphan 'The'
In:
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-InkML-20061023/#OverviewElements

there is an orphan sentence fragment 'The' at the end of the paragraph before
the example.

2. extra 's' in valuess
In:
<quote
cite="http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-InkML-20061023/#traceContents">
Additionally, wsp may occur anywhere except within a decimal or hex
and must occur if required to separate two valuess.
</quote>

There is a redundant terminal 's' in the last word.

3. Roll-your-own BNF -NOT

If the BNF you are using
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-InkML-20061023/#trace
  is a subset of the EBNF used in XML
http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/REC-xml-20001006#sec-notation
please say so.  Compare with
http://www.w3.org/TR/SVGMobile12/refs.html


Al
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