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Editorial comments on CC/PP Structure and Vocabularies Last Call WD

From: Masayasu Ishikawa <mimasa@w3.org>
Date: Wed, 16 Apr 2003 08:13:20 +0900 (JST)
Message-Id: <20030416.081320.41649111.mimasa@w3.org>
To: www-mobile@w3.org

Hello,

The following is a couple of minor editorial comments on the CC/PP
Structure and Vocabularies Last Call WD [1].  Nothing is substantial.

- "2.1.3 Defaults" [2]
  In the third paragraph "ccpp:default" should be "ccpp:defaults".

- "4.1.1.4 Rational number" [3], Figure 4-4
  In an example XML Schema, targetNamespace is specified as
  "http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-CCPP-struct-vocab-20030320/", which
  doesn't match the TR URI.  It might be confusing.

- "5. Acknowledgments" [4]
  Some WG members' affiliation would be out of date, e.g. Hidetaka Ohto
  is no longer a W3C fellow.  I'd recommend to check them again.

- "6. References" [5]
  There are anchors like "[1]", but "[" and "]" are excluded characters
  in the URI syntax and thus must be escaped, so those characters
  may not be appropriate for fragment identifiers.

- "6.2. Informative References" [6]
  [CONNEGMATCH] reference would be out of date.  As far as I know
  there was at least -04 draft, but I'm not quite sure about its
  current status (sorry).

  References to XML Schema specs say that those are Proposed
  Recommendations.  Those are Recommendations now.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-CCPP-struct-vocab-20030325/
[2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-CCPP-struct-vocab-20030325/#xtocid-33666514
[3] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-CCPP-struct-vocab-20030325/#xtocid-33666544
[4] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-CCPP-struct-vocab-20030325/#Acknowledgements
[5] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-CCPP-struct-vocab-20030325/#xtocid-33666550
[6] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-CCPP-struct-vocab-20030325/#inform_refs

Regards,
-- 
Masayasu Ishikawa / mimasa@w3.org
W3C - World Wide Web Consortium
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