[charmod-norm] Definition of "natural language content' (Section 1.4)

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== Definition of "natural language content' (Section 1.4) ==
The text reads "and not to any of the surrounding syntactic content or
 identifiers that form part of the document structure..."  

Clarity would be improved by saying "... any of the surrounding or 
embedded syntactic content..."
Also, given the way syntactic content is defined, aren't identifiers 
that form part of the document structure also syntactic content?  Is 
so, "or identifiers" is either redundant, confusing, or both.

Text also reads " Note that the natural language content can include 
items such as the document title as well..."   That would be less 
likely to confuse if it said "... can include items such as document 
or section titles as well..."


See https://github.com/w3c/charmod-norm/issues/58
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Received on Thursday, 4 February 2016 02:11:04 UTC