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Re: [Moderator Action] minor typos in WD-ruby-19991217

From: Martin J. Duerst <duerst@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 20 Dec 1999 15:42:29 +0900
Message-Id: <199912200714.QAA12224@sh.w3.mag.keio.ac.jp>
To: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
Cc: www-international@w3.org
Forwarded by the list maintainer.

At 00:53 1999/12/19 -0500, Susan Lesch wrote:
> In response to the last call Working Draft [1] "Ruby Annotation," here is a
> report of suggested minor typographical changes. It's a beautiful, elegant
> specification which I very much enjoyed reading.
> 
> Section number and an approximate paragraph ("par") number is followed by a
> quote and then a suggestion. Comments are in brackets [].
> 
> 1.1 par 6
> i.e., before
> i.e., before
> 
> i.e. after,
> i.e., after,
> 
> 1.1 par 7
> (i.e. again before)
> (i.e., again before)
> 
> base, that is
> base; that is,
> 
> 1.1 par 9
>     In this specification, the term "before" means "above" in
>     horizontal layout / "right side" in vertical (in this
>     context, top-to-bottom, right-to-left) layout, and the
>     term "after" means "below" in horizontal layout / "left
>     side" in vertical layout.
> [could be:]
>     In this specification, the term "before" means "above" in
>     horizontal layout and "right side" in vertical (in this
>     context, top-to-bottom, right-to-left) layout. The
>     term "after" means "below" in horizontal layout and "left
>     side" in vertical layout.
> 
> 1.1 par 12
> a person name
> a person's name
> 
> 1.2 par 3 (Note)
> choosen
> chosen
> [twice]
> 
> 1.2.2 par 1
> more than one ruby texts
> more than one ruby text
> 
> th/td
> th and td
> 
> 1.2.3. par 3
>     Because in this case, the ruby texts are used to
>     represent pronunciation, so it is straightforward to use
>     them for non-visual rendering.
> [could be:]
>     Because in this case the ruby texts are used to
>     represent pronunciation, it is straightforward to use
>     them for non-visual rendering.
> [or:]
>     Because, in this case, the ruby texts are used to
> 	represent pronunciation, it is straightforward to use
> 
> 2.4 par 1
> MUST not
> must not
> [or MUST NOT, and mention RFC 2119]
> 
> 2.4 par 6 (Note)
>     it is recommended that visual user agents should place
>     the ruby text before the ruby base when only one ruby
>     text is used.
> [could be:]
>     it is recommended that visual user agents place
>     the ruby text before the ruby base when only one ruby
>     text is used.
> [or:]
>     visual user agents should place the ruby text before
>     the ruby base when only one ruby text is used.
> 
> 2.6 par 1
> between the ruby bases and the ruby texts
> between ruby bases and ruby texts
> 
> 2.6 par 4
> Figures 1.2.2.1.
> Figure 1.2.2.1.
> 
> C. Glossary (definition for Group ruby)
> between the ruby bases and the ruby texts
> between ruby bases and ruby texts
> 
> D. Changes
> Splitted
> Split
> 
> Reference (XHTML11)
> Eds.
> eds.
> 
> Reference (XHTMLMOD)
> et. al.,
> et al.,
> 
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/WD-ruby-19991217
> 
> Best wishes,
> --
> Susan Lesch
> susan@textet.com
> http://www.textet.com/
> 
> 
> 
> 


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