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Re: [Access Module] minor editorial nits: Section 3.1.4 of 2008-08-20 Editor's Draft

From: Shane McCarron <shane@aptest.com>
Date: Fri, 05 Sep 2008 16:13:36 -0500
Message-ID: <48C1A100.4010406@aptest.com>
To: "Gregory J. Rosmaita" <oedipus@hicom.net>
CC: www-html-editor@w3.org

Thanks - I have updated these in my local copy.

Gregory J. Rosmaita wrote:
> aloha, shane!
>
> a few quick editorial nits on the 2008-08-20 editor's draft of the Access 
> Module:
>
> 1) in the first bullet point in the list in section 3.1.4, the strings
> "matching element" and "element group" aren't emphasized, as they are 
> wherever else they occur in the document
>
> 2) in the second bullet point, the string "matching element" isn't 
> emphasized, nor is the string emphasized in the first numbered list item;
>
> 3) the strings "focus" and "element group" in the first numbered list 
> item are not emphasized as they are elsewhere;
>
> 4) the strings "focus" "matching element" and "element group" are not
> emphasized in the second numbered list item;
>
> 5) in the third numbered list item, "no remaining elements groups" 
> should be "no remaining element groups" -- again, neither instance 
> of "element groups" in this list item is emphasized.
>
> only noticed because i was groking the document in preparation for 
> getting the UAWG to devote some time to working on the discoverability
> of remapped keys when the character isn't available or isn't contained
> in the labelling text for the element for which access has been sent...
>
> gregory.
>
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