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Re: WD-xhtml2-20040722: Minor typos

From: Masayasu Ishikawa <mimasa@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 26 Jul 2004 15:31:20 +0900 (JST)
Message-Id: <20040726.153120.48529329.mimasa@w3.org>
To: dmh@dmh.org.uk
Cc: www-html-editor@w3.org


As usual, thanks for your careful reading.

Dave Hodder <dmh@dmh.org.uk> wrote:

>    * Section 1.2, first bullet point, first sub-bullet point.  "XHTML 2
>      lets you explicit markup..." should be "explicitly" not "explicit".


>    * Section 1.2, third bullet point and fourth bullet point.  Two
>      references to "HTML4" rather than "HTML 4".


>    * Section 8.  "address | blockcode | blockquote | div | p | pre |
>      section | separator |" has a superfluous vertical bar.


>    * Section 9.2, quote from "The Two Towers".  Firstly, the opening
>      <cite> has a superfluous double quote character.

Already fixed, as previously reported.

>      Secondly Gandalf
>      the White does *not* speak 'xml:lang="en-us"'!  Arguably
>      xml:lang="en-gb" would be more appropriate.  ;o)

I'd let the editor of this section to decide.  He speaks en-gb
natively so he must know better than I.

>    * Section 23.1.  'declare = "declare".  When present, this boolean
>      attribute makes the current object element a declaration only...'
>      "current object element" makes no sense, as section 23.1 is for the
>      "script" element.

Thanks for pointing this out, this is a problem due to loading
the same attribute definition from two different places.
In any case, the Scripting Module will be dropped from the next draft,
so this problem will go away.

>    * Section 25.1.3. Specifying external style sheets.  '<xml-stylesheet
>      href="mystyle.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css"?>' is missing an
>      initial "?".


These changes will be reflected to the next draft.

Masayasu Ishikawa / mimasa@w3.org
W3C - World Wide Web Consortium
Received on Monday, 26 July 2004 02:31:22 UTC

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