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Comments for WD-xhtml-print-20030729

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 7 Sep 2003 17:54:52 -0700
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To: www-html-editor@w3.org

Hello,

These are minor editorial comments for your XHTML-Print Last Call
Working Draft [1]. Kudos to the editor and your group(s). It looks
great.

s/family of XHTML Languages/family of XHTML languages/
s/members/Members/
s/whitespace/white space/
s/Style Sheet/style sheet/
s/guillemots/guillemets/
s/ththe/the/
s/, support/. Support/

In 4.3 I am not sure the RFC 2119 key word MUST makes sense in an
informative section (it might).

Diagram 1 is squished to height="303" width="450". The image is really
height="404" width="600".

It would help to have these spelled out in their first occurrence:
EXIF (Exchangeable Image File Format)
JFIF (JPEG File Interchange Format)
TIFF (Tag Image File Format)
IFD (image file directory)

It may make sense to mark up elements and attributes globally
<code>thus</code>, as they are in 1.3.1 and some other places (that
eliminates the need for quotes in the 4.1 heading).

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-xhtml-print-20030729/

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch           http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/
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