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Comments for WD-xml-events-20011026

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sat, 17 Nov 2001 23:49:43 -0800
Message-Id: <p05100302b81d1781db4b@[192.168.123.102]>
To: www-html-editor@w3.org
These are minor comments for your Last Call Working Draft at
http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-xml-events-20011026/

In Status of This Document, member (twice) -> Member
and membership -> Membership

The illustration in 1. is beautiful! Should the right-hand line coming
from Root be black?

Also in 1., targetted (twice) -> targeted
and targetting -> targeting

In 2, XML Namespaces [NAME] ->
XML namespaces [NAME] or Namespaces in XML [NAME]

In 2.1, mouseclicks -> mouse clicks (to match 1.)

In 2.4, summarises -> summarizes

You might add dates to each reference in B.

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org  tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org
Received on Sunday, 18 November 2001 02:49:46 UTC

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