Congratulations on your XHTML Basic Proposed Recommendation [1]. Here are two minor comments. In the Abstract, Host Language -> host language [or else use caps in 1.2, and 4. Modularization of XHTML didn't seem quite clear on this either.] In clause 1.1: HTML 4 was designed for large devices, overlapping windows/frames menus, mouse input pointing device, high powered CPU, large power supply. This switches from plural to singular. How about: HTML 4 was designed for large devices, overlapping windows/frames menus, mouse input pointing devices, high powered CPUs, and large power supplies. [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/PR-xhtml-basic-20001103/ Best wishes for your project, -- Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819 World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/Received on Saturday, 11 November 2000 20:16:14 GMT
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