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minor typos in WD-xhtml-modularization-20000105

From: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Jan 2000 16:04:50 -0800
Message-Id: <v04210103b4a4183bc86b@[24.25.222.186]>
To: www-html-editor@w3.org
These are the minor typos I found in the "Modularization of XHTML" 
last call draft [1] "work in progress." They are really nits (and 
some may be debatable); fixing them might enhance readability.

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xhtml-modularization-20000105/

1.3.2
Group. (e.g. DCD, SOX, DDML, XSchema)
Group (e.g., DCD, SOX, DDML, XSchema).

2. entity, markup model, modularization, and parameter entity
ie.
i.e.

2. entity reference
eg.
e.g.

2. parameter
entity
parameter entity

3.3 item 3
e.g.
e.g.,

3.3 whitespace
two white space
two whitespace

sequence of white space
sequence of whitespace

e.g.
e.g.,

3.4
e.g.
e.g., [three times]

4.1.1
Content set
content set

instances or expr
instances of expr

Defining
defining [twice]

4.1.3 Charsets
space separated
space-separated

4.1.3 Length
either a Pixels or a percentage
either in pixels or a percentage

4.1.3 LinkTypes
White space
Whitespace

4.1.3 MediaDesc
comma separated
comma-separated

4.1.3 URI
space separated
space-separated

4.1.4
their use is identified via their name rather than enumerating the list.
their use is identified by name rather than by enumerating the list.

4.4.1
In additional,
In addition,

4.8, 4.9, 4.11, 4.13, and 4.19
Inexplicably (to me), some element names in these modules end in &.

4.13
ONLY when
<em>only</em> when

C.1 [SRGB]
color Space
Color Space

C.1 [XHTML1] and [XMLSCHEMA]
et. al.,
et al.,

C.2
[RFC-1808]
[RFC1808]

C.2 [TIDY]
well formed XML
well-formed XML

i.e.
i.e.,


Thanks for your time.
-- 
Susan Lesch
susan@textet.com
http://www.textet.com/
Received on Thursday, 13 January 2000 19:04:49 GMT

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