- From: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
- Date: Wed, 12 Jan 2000 23:16:04 -0800
- To: www-html-editor@w3.org
Here are minor, minor typo reports for your working draft "Building XHTML Modules"[1] sent in hopes they aren't premature. The specification is clear, well-written, and easy to follow, and I wish you the best in this project. (I will try to send a report on the other two last call drafts this week.) [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xhtml-building-20000105/ In most cases, the section number is followed by a quote and an attempt at correction: 1.2 through the module and way those facilities through the module and the way those facilities 2. markup model ie. [three times] i.e. (ie., a schema) (ie., a schema). 2. modularization ie. i.e. 2. parameter entity parameter entity ie. i.e. 3.1 specification (currently on XML DTDs are defined). specification; (currently only XML DTDs are defined). 3.2 the resources relationship the resource's relationship (e.g. MyML 1.0). (e.g., MyML 1.0). (e.g. EN). (e.g., EN). an XHTML conforming module an XHTML-conforming module 4. An XHTML conforming module An XHTML-conforming module 4.1 Content set instances or expr instances of expr 4.1 Defining the legal values of attributes verical bars vertical bars 4.4 exampple example 4.4.1 lodge | lift | chalet | room | lobby. lodge | lift | chalet | room | lobby | fireplace. 6. par 1 e.g. e.g., 6.3.1 used on its own (for example, you used on its own; (for example, you A.1 [XHTML1], [MATHML], and [XMLSCHEMA] et al. A.2 [RFC-1808] [RFC1808] [TIDY] well formed XML well-formed XML i.e. i.e., template.dtd ------------ make capitalization of "reserved" match on lines 18 and 24 line 37 replace it simply be replace it simply by lines 45 and 67 this serves This serves line 75 (Required) (required) Best wishes, -- Susan Lesch susan@textet.com http://www.textet.com/
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