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minor typos in WD-xhtml-building-20000105

From: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
Date: Wed, 12 Jan 2000 23:16:04 -0800
Message-Id: <v04210102b4a32b4622dd@[24.25.222.186]>
To: www-html-editor@w3.org
Here are minor, minor typo reports for your working draft "Building 
XHTML Modules"[1] sent in hopes they aren't premature. The 
specification is clear, well-written, and easy to follow, and I wish 
you the best in this project. (I will try to send a report on the 
other two last call drafts this week.)

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xhtml-building-20000105/

In most cases, the section number is followed by a quote and an 
attempt at correction:


1.2
through the module and way those facilities
through the module and the way those facilities

2. markup model
ie. [three times]
i.e.

(ie., a schema)
(ie., a schema).

2. modularization
ie.
i.e.

2. parameter
entity
parameter entity

ie.
i.e.

3.1
specification (currently on XML DTDs are defined).
specification; (currently only XML DTDs are defined).

3.2
the resources relationship
the resource's relationship

(e.g. MyML 1.0).
(e.g., MyML 1.0).

(e.g. EN).
(e.g., EN).

an XHTML conforming module
an XHTML-conforming module

4.
An XHTML conforming module
An XHTML-conforming module

4.1 Content set
instances or expr
instances of expr

4.1 Defining the legal values of attributes
verical bars
vertical bars

4.4
exampple
example

4.4.1
lodge | lift | chalet | room | lobby.
lodge | lift | chalet | room | lobby | fireplace.

6. par 1
e.g.
e.g.,

6.3.1
used on its own (for example, you
used on its own; (for example, you

A.1 [XHTML1], [MATHML], and [XMLSCHEMA]
et al.

A.2
[RFC-1808]
[RFC1808]

[TIDY]
well formed XML
well-formed XML

i.e.
i.e.,



template.dtd
------------
make capitalization of "reserved" match on lines 18 and 24

line 37
replace it simply be
replace it simply by

lines 45 and 67
this serves
This serves

line 75
(Required)
(required)


Best wishes,
-- 
Susan Lesch
susan@textet.com
http://www.textet.com/
Received on Thursday, 13 January 2000 02:16:02 GMT

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