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7.3 / 7.4 Typos

From: <AndrewWatt2001@aol.com>
Date: Fri, 30 Aug 2002 11:03:35 EDT
Message-ID: <b2.10e392ff.2aa0e347@aol.com>
To: www-forms@w3.org, www-forms-editor@w3.org, xforms@yahoogroups.com

In 7.3 on the second line between the code examples the word "node" should be 
inserted since instance data is expressed in nodes.

In 7.3. second code example the term "instance" (unqualified) is used. Is 
that short for xforms:instance i.e. the element or what?

In 7.4 line 1 "LocationPath" should be replaced by "location path".

In 7.4 line 2 "the a node" should be edited.

In 7.4 paragraph 2 line 1 "there restrictions" seems to lack an "are". All 
good WDs need their "are"s to fall back on. :)

In 7.4 paragraph 3 line 1 "predicate expression" should probably simply read 
"predicate".

Same line - Is there a "comparison"?? ... Maybe a "relation" or 
"relationship"??

7.4 Note - I wasn't aware that a predicate had "sides". Some editing is 
suggested.

It seems to me that the Note in 7.4 needs editing for clarity / coherence.

7.4.2 line 1 - Should "data instance" be "instance data"?

Andrew Watt
Received on Friday, 30 August 2002 11:03:45 GMT

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