DPF Section 4.4.1 from Keith Waters on 2005-06-01 (www-di@w3.org from June 2005)

From: Keith Waters <kwaters@ftrd.us>
Date: Wed, 1 Jun 2005 16:59:01 -0400
To: www-di@w3.org
Message-Id: <7AECF4ED-7BE1-4730-A283-D751A62763ED@ftrd.us>

Hi Jeremy,

This message contains a response to comments on

http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-DPF-20041122/

e6:
section 4.1.4
Wording last para

I found the wording here confusing, I started looking for more
information elsewhere (e.g. in the appendixes) concerning these
examples.

Suggest:
old
[[
Informative examples are given to
explain how this works, for example
]]
new
[[
Some informative examples are:
]]


The Working Group agrees and has made the edit.

-Keith Waters

Received on Wednesday, 1 June 2005 20:59:31 UTC