RE: Starting the document

> (though there is always the risk of having too many targets in one
> paper for reviewers to aim at... and some folks take query rather
> passionately ;-)
>

That's a good point - we do need to have a round later in the process where
we imagine hypothetical reviewers and see how to please them.
It might be helpful to think of particularly people - e.g. I tend to try to
think what Peter might find acceptable (I don't believe I often succeed).