Re: Arch Doc: 23 June 2003 Editor's Draft [review thru 2.5.2]

Dan Connolly wrote:
> On Mon, 2003-06-23 at 13:52, Ian B. Jacobs wrote:
> [...]
> 
>>Comments welcome,
>>
>> - Ian
>>
>>[1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2003/webarch-20030623
> 
> 
> No showstoppers so far, but my eyes are tired
> after reading thru 2.5.2. I hope to finish
> reading tomorrow.

I'm pretty well OK with Dan's comments (I see he & I caught a couple of 
the same things) except for the co-reference thing, so I think you can 
arm the torpedos and fire.  I'll be at my desk most of tomorrow and if 
not you can call me on my cell if any interactive hairsplitting is 
required. -Tim