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RE: 13 Aug Arch Doc available for review

From: Paul Cotton <pcotton@microsoft.com>
Date: Wed, 14 Aug 2002 13:37:47 -0400
Message-ID: <E7AC4500EAB7A442ABA7521D18814397032F9D0A@tor-msg-01.northamerica.corp.microsoft.com>
To: "Ian B. Jacobs" <ij@w3.org>
Cc: <www-archive@w3.org>

Since everyone else is reviewing the Architecture document from front to
back I thought I might start to do an "editorial pass" "back to front".
I am not bothering www-tag@w3.org with these minor nits but I am
archiving my message in case we need to reference it.

/paulc

1. IANA Schemes
In nearly all the references you provide a visible URL for the reader of
a printed copy but do not do this for "Dan Connolly's list of URI
schemes".

2. Axioms
There should be a period at the end of this reference.

3. Cool
There should be a period at the end of this reference and after "1998".

4. Fielding
The comma after "Irvine" should be a period and there should be a period
at the end of this reference.

5. Fragments
There should be a period at the end of this reference.

6. REST
This reference also is missing a visible URL.

7. UniqueDNS
This reference also is missing a visible URL.

8. XHTML1
This reference is one of the few that uses the "latest version" URL.  I
wonder if you did this since it was about be revised.  Since this has
been done very recently I wonder if the URL should be
http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/REC-xhtml1-20020801/. In any case you may want
to add "Second Edition" to the title and to change the date.

9. W3CPROCESS
The hyperlink is to
http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process-20010719/tr.html#Reports and I was
expecting just http://www.w3.org/Consortium/Process-20010719/.  Maybe
the title of this reference should be changed to reflect that it is
pointing at a particular chapter.

This reference also is missing a visible URL.

Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada 
17 Eleanor Drive, Nepean, Ontario K2E 6A3 
Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329 
<mailto:pcotton@microsoft.com> 


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ian B. Jacobs [mailto:ij@w3.org]
> Sent: Tuesday, August 13, 2002 4:30 PM
> To: www-tag@w3.org
> Subject: 13 Aug Arch Doc available for review
> 
> 
> Hello www-tag,
> 
> The TAG invites your comments on the latest draft
> of the Architecture Document [1]. The TAG expects
> to publish a first public Working Draft (on the
> TR page) of the Architecture Document in a few weeks
> and would like material feedback on the current draft.
> 
> The TAG does not commit to responding to every comment;
> this is not a formal call for review. The usual TAG
> policy [2] regarding email on this list is in effect.
> 
> Please be concrete in your comments. Propose alternative
> language. Avoid sustaining long threads.
> 
> Chapter 1 ("Identifiers and Resources") may deserve the
> most attention -- it has received a lot more attention
> from the TAG than the other chatpers. On the other hand,
> concrete suggestions for how to structure the other
> chapters could also help us improve the first public
> draft.
> 
> Thank you,
> 
>    - Ian
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/2002/0813-archdoc
> [2] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/#tag-attn
> --
> Ian Jacobs (ij@w3.org)   http://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs
> Tel:                     +1 718 260-9447
Received on Wednesday, 14 August 2002 13:39:13 GMT

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