Curricula Unit 5 comments

Hi Daniel,

It was more effective for me to track changes and comments in a copy of the page. The attached can be opened in a word processing program for review of in-line tracked changes and comments.

If you prefer, I can extract the information into the survey or GitHub.

All comments and edit suggestions are for editor discretion and EOWG input. I'm happy to discuss any as useful.

Best,
~Shawn