[Fwd: Re: Publishing Accessible Presentations - reply by Wednesday 31 March]

oops - now on the record.  Andrew

-------- Original Message --------
Subject: Re: Publishing Accessible Presentations - reply by Wednesday 31 
March
Date: Wed, 31 Mar 2010 10:21:56 +0100
From: Andrew Arch <andrew@w3.org>
To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
References: <4B9AE76F.5050509@w3.org> <4BAD5F30.6030402@w3.org>

Hi Shawn,

A few comments:

# Status
- on Contacting Organizations about Inaccessible Websites, we included a
status box at the bottom of the page. I suggest something similar for
this document.

# Planning
- in two points you refer to "interpreters". I suggest this become "sign
language interpreters" to be completely clear. Unless we intended to
include other language issues that don't seem to have been raised elsewhere.

# During
- use a Microphone; for the Europeans and Australians consider changing
to "including people using ALDs, hearing induction loops, and remote
CART writers"

Andrew


Shawn Henry wrote:
> EOWG,
> 
> How to Make Presentations Accessible to All is updated online at:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/training/accessible.php
> 
> Please let me know *by Wednesday 31 March* if you approve publishing it 
> as a draft for review[1], have comments, or if you would like more time 
> to review it.
> 
> Remember to send comments to the appropriate mailing list:
> - EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org> for significant issues and things that need 
> discussion
> - EOWG editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org> for minor editorial comments that 
> don't need discussion
> 
> The Analysis with scope, etc.; links to previous drafts and EOWG 
> minutes; and a list of changes made today is under: 
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#accessible
> 
> Thanks,
> ~Shawn
> 
> [1] Example announcement of a draft-for-review publication: 
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/highlights/archive#x20100106a
> 
> 
> 
> 
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: For Review: Making Presentations Accessible [Rough Draft] - due 
> 22 March
> Date: Fri, 12 Mar 2010 19:16:31 -0600
> From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
> To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
> CC: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
> 
> EOWG,
> 
> I have updated the analysis/requirements (including scope) and the draft 
> document based on our EOWG teleconference discussion today.
> * Analysis with scope, etc. is at: 
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#accessible
> * Latest draft is at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/training/access_pres
> 
> Please review both of these for content, and the document for high-level 
> issues. (It is still rough so no need to comment on the detailed 
> copyediting level yet.) Make sure to refresh with your browser to get 
> the latest version.
> 
> Here are some questions for your review and comment via e-mail:
> * Is anything missing? Are their areas where we want to provide more 
> specific or detailed guidance? (Keep in mind the limited scope and 
> desire to keep it short.)
> * Should anything be cut out to simplify and shorten the document?
> * What do you think about the terminology options: Presentations, Talks, 
> Meetings, Training, Sessions? (Note what is included in the scope and 
> what is out of scope, at 
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#accessible )
> * What about the title? Should we have a short title with only one term, 
> and then in the first sentence clarify that it applies to different 
> situations, using more of the terms? See title ideas at 
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#title2
> * What do you think about each editorial question throughout the draft 
> document? They are highlighted green and surrounded by: [@@ question ?]
> 
> Please send comments to the EOWG list: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
> (If you are compelled to send copyedits or other things that don't need 
> EOWG consideration, send them to the EO editors' list: 
> wai-eo-editors@w3.org )
> 
> When sending comments, please include the date and time of the document 
> that your comments apply to. It is at the top after "Editor's Draft" in 
> the format: $Date: 2010/03/12 13:23:59 $
> 
> Please send your comments in e-mail *by Monday 22 March*.
> 
> Regards,
> ~Shawn
> 
> 
> 
> -----
> Shawn Lawton Henry
> W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> e-mail: shawn@w3.org
> phone: +1.617.395.7664
> about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/
> 


-- 
Andrew Arch
Web Accessibility and Ageing Specialist
http://www.w3.org/People/Andrew/
http://www.w3.org/WAI/WAI-AGE/

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