- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 23 Jun 2009 09:17:45 -0500
- To: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
- CC: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>, Jo Rabin <jrabin@mtld.mobi>, Francois Daoust <fd@w3.org>
Hi Alan, I apologize for just now getting to do a thorough review of the Overview page. I forgot to put it on my To Do list. :( I have one point, a few easy copyedits, and reminders: 1. What do you think of linking "W3C WAI recommends using WCAG 2.0" to http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/wcag#version * In the Appendix A: References, please change the URI http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/WAI-WEBCONTENT-19990505/" to "http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG10/" * In the Appendix A: References, please change "Lawton Henry, S." to "Henry, S.L." for both [WAI/Experiences] and [WAI/Mobile] * In the Appendix A: References, make the formatting of the reference consistent, e.g., you have the date in [MWBP1.0] but not in the others, and for the first two the title is linked but the bottom three they aren't and instead the URI is in parenthesis afterwards. * The "Document Information" footer is from the WAI Resource template (that is, non-TR web pages on the WAI subsite). I don't think we need any of that in the final version. (See other Notes.) * Remember "This document (will be in final version) also available as a [single HTML file]." * Status section needs updating. (I think François can do that as the Team Contact managing the publication.) I think that's all now! Thanks, ~Shawn ----- Shawn Lawton Henry W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) e-mail: shawn@w3.org phone: +1.617.395.7664 about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/
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