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MWBP-WCAG link and copyedits

From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 23 Jun 2009 09:17:45 -0500
Message-ID: <4A40E409.1040305@w3.org>
To: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
CC: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>, Jo Rabin <jrabin@mtld.mobi>, Francois Daoust <fd@w3.org>
Hi Alan,

I apologize for just now getting to do a thorough review of the Overview page. I forgot to put it on my To Do list. :(

I have one point, a few easy copyedits, and reminders:

1. What do you think of linking "W3C WAI recommends using WCAG 2.0" to http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/wcag#version

* In the Appendix A: References, please change the URI http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/WAI-WEBCONTENT-19990505/" to "http://www.w3.org/TR/WCAG10/"

* In the Appendix A: References, please change "Lawton Henry, S." to "Henry, S.L." for both [WAI/Experiences] and [WAI/Mobile]

* In the Appendix A: References, make the formatting of the reference consistent, e.g., you have the date in [MWBP1.0] but not in the others, and for the first two the title is linked but the bottom three they aren't and instead the URI is in parenthesis afterwards.

* The "Document Information" footer is from the WAI Resource template (that is, non-TR web pages on the WAI subsite). I don't think we need any of that in the final version. (See other Notes.) 

* Remember "This document (will be in final version) also available as a [single HTML file]."

* Status section needs updating. (I think François can do that as the Team Contact managing the publication.)

I think that's all now!

Thanks,
~Shawn


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W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
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