suggestions for How to Report Inaccessible Websites

EO Editors:

Attached is a text file containing a number of possible edits to How 
to Report Inaccessible   Websites.

I refer to Sharon's message from after Friday's call, actions from 
the Minutes, etc.

These are the suggestions I'd indicated I would send during Friday's call.

I'm new, so thanks in advance for taking that into account.  My aim 
with these ideas was to help with tightening the language, rather 
than to introduce anything new or controversial.

Best,
Jennifer