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Re: Business Case Overview

From: Andrew Arch <andrew@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 08 Jun 2009 13:58:00 +0100
Message-ID: <4A2D0AD8.40107@w3.org>
To: achuter@technosite.es
CC: "wai-eo-editors@w3.org" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Thanks Alan,

All good suggestions.

Andrew

Alan Chuter wrote:
> I noticed a few small things in the Introduction to this document [1].
> 
> Second paragraph of introduction "While accessibility focuses on people
> with disabilities, accessibility also benefits..." repeats
> "accessibility." Could be "While accessibility focuses on people with
> disabilities, it also benefits..."
> 
> Third paragraph, "invest the initial costs" could be "make the initial
> investment."
> 
> The last sentence "a" rather than "the" in "...an analysis of the
> project's value..."
> 
> 
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/age/Overview.html
> 
> 
> Alan Chuter,
> Consultor
> Departamento de Accesibilidad y Experiencia de Usuario
> Technosite - Grupo Fundosa
> Fundación ONCE
> Tel: 91 121 03 30
> E-mail: achuter@technosite.es
> www.technosite.es 
> 
> 
> 
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