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Business Case Overview

From: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
Date: Fri, 05 Jun 2009 16:33:14 +0200
To: "wai-eo-editors@w3.org" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Message-ID: <WorldClient-F200906051633.AA33140941@technosite.es>
I noticed a few small things in the Introduction to this document [1].

Second paragraph of introduction "While accessibility focuses on people
with disabilities, accessibility also benefits..." repeats
"accessibility." Could be "While accessibility focuses on people with
disabilities, it also benefits..."

Third paragraph, "invest the initial costs" could be "make the initial
investment."

The last sentence "a" rather than "the" in "...an analysis of the
project's value..."



[1] http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/age/Overview.html


Alan Chuter,
Consultor
Departamento de Accesibilidad y Experiencia de Usuario
Technosite - Grupo Fundosa
Fundación ONCE
Tel: 91 121 03 30
E-mail: achuter@technosite.es
www.technosite.es 
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