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Shared Web Experiences - 3 comments

From: <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 9 Sep 2008 15:58:44 -0500 (CDT)
Message-ID: <2113.75.134.19.95.1220993924.squirrel@webmail.w3.org>
To: yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk
Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org

Hi Yeliz,

A few more little things...

1. Can you confirm that you addressed the comments in
<http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/wai-eo-editors/2008Aug/0008.html>

2. In response to
<http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/wai-eo-editors/2008Aug/0005.html>,
how about under "Long words, long and complex sentences, jargon"

something like this:
"Disabilities Context: Users with some types fo cognitive disabilities
have difficulty processing information. Users who are deaf and whose
native language is sign, have difficulty processing complex written
language."

3. Minor considerations:

* "...as described in Understanding the Four Principles of Accessibility
section of Introduction to Understanding WCAG 2.0." - remove the second
link so as to simplify it and decrease the focus on this unimportant
point.

* "This page also includes links to some relevant solutions in:" - delete
the word "also"

* I think a little more context should be provided at the beginning of
<http://www.w3.org/WAI/mobile/experiences-format.html>. How about
something like this: "This page contains information from the 'Shared Web
Experiences' document in an alternative table format. Please see the main
page, <a href...>Shared Web Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device
Users and People with Disabilities</a>, for an introduction to this
information."

* What do you think about titling that page "Table of Shared Web
Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device Users and People with
Disabilities" ?

Thanks for all your work on this, Yeliz!

Regards,
~Shawn
Received on Tuesday, 9 September 2008 20:59:20 GMT

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