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Shared Web Experiences - 3 comments

From: <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 9 Sep 2008 15:58:44 -0500 (CDT)
Message-ID: <2113.>
To: yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk
Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org

Hi Yeliz,

A few more little things...

1. Can you confirm that you addressed the comments in

2. In response to
how about under "Long words, long and complex sentences, jargon"

something like this:
"Disabilities Context: Users with some types fo cognitive disabilities
have difficulty processing information. Users who are deaf and whose
native language is sign, have difficulty processing complex written

3. Minor considerations:

* "...as described in Understanding the Four Principles of Accessibility
section of Introduction to Understanding WCAG 2.0." - remove the second
link so as to simplify it and decrease the focus on this unimportant

* "This page also includes links to some relevant solutions in:" - delete
the word "also"

* I think a little more context should be provided at the beginning of
<http://www.w3.org/WAI/mobile/experiences-format.html>. How about
something like this: "This page contains information from the 'Shared Web
Experiences' document in an alternative table format. Please see the main
page, <a href...>Shared Web Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device
Users and People with Disabilities</a>, for an introduction to this

* What do you think about titling that page "Table of Shared Web
Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device Users and People with
Disabilities" ?

Thanks for all your work on this, Yeliz!

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