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WAI-AGE Lit Review comments - Up to Section 2

From: Lisa Pappas <Lisa.Pappas@sas.com>
Date: Thu, 1 May 2008 13:41:26 -0400
To: Andrew Arch <andrew@w3.org>
CC: "wai-eo-editors@w3.org" <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Message-ID: <345520A34347BA49B798F70B218ACD130471F6ECDC@MERCMBX14.na.sas.com>
Hi, Andrew,

I've been working on comments on the literature review. I'm sure some of these items you've already seen and corrected.

I hope these don't seem overly precise...Technical editing is a particular skill of mine, with emphasis in writing for better translations.

First of a few...

Lisa


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