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typos on WAI Age literature review

From: Sylvie duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
Date: Tue, 29 Apr 2008 16:14:16 +0200
Message-ID: <48172D38.9030602@snv.jussieu.fr>
To: wai-eo-editors@w3.org

hello,
1. One typo in abstract :
This docuent instead of this document
2. In introdution :
"By the 2006 in addition to online services ...", isn't a word missing?
3; Further in introduction :
"documenting the essential requirements for Web content to be 
accessibility to people with disabilities." don't you mean "to be 
[accessible] and not accessibility?
4. "This issue in compounding because the world’s population ..." is a 
word missing?
5. In How older adults use the Web :
word used twice : "Fox (2004) found that that older USA Web users do 
product research..." delete one "that".

Best
Sylvie
Received on Tuesday, 29 April 2008 14:15:07 GMT

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