[wbs] response to 'EOWG Call for Review: WCAG 2.0 Presentation 1'

The following answers have been successfully submitted to 'EOWG Call for
Review: WCAG 2.0 Presentation 1' (Education and Outreach Working Group)
for Liam McGee.



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Version
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Which version are these comments for? The version date is on Slide 2.  


 * ( ) 27 August 2007
 * (x) Latest: 31 August





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Acceptance of WCAG 2.0 Presentation
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Based on the current version, please answer below. Note that you can
change your answer; for example, if there are edits later.


 * ( ) I accept this version of the document as is
 * ( ) I accept this version of the document, and suggest changes below
 * ( ) I accept this version of the document only if the changes below are
implemented
 * (x) I do not accept this version of the document because of the
comments below
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)





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Comments
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Comments on the document, formatted as described above.

Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
Priority: High
Slide number: 27, 29, 30, 45,61, 65
Issue: There are empty 'click to add outline' elements in OpenOffice
Impress.

Priority: [editor's discretion]
Slide number: 8
suggested revision: put in some killer stats -- how many people have
collaborated to date on WCAG2? How many comments were received on each
working draft so far?

Priority: [editor's discretion]
General: Can the word doc be made smaller? 22Mb is rather large.

Priority: [editor's discretion]
Slide number: 14
Note: The 'working draft' text on preceding slides has changed to 'public
working draft' - intentional?

Otherwise, great!




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SKIP THIS OLD QUESTION [Community or Public]
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First, a relatively easy question:The presentation talks about
"Community|Public review, comments, and feedback..." and "Providing
adequate time for community|public review," on Slide 8, Slide 9 Notes, and
Slide 11 Notes. Do you prefer "community" or "public" for these? Use the
comment field for any explanations.  


 * ( ) Prefer community
 * ( ) Prefer public
 * ( ) No preference

Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 





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SKIP THIS OLD QUESTION [Example of WCAG 2.0 providing more design
flexibility]
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Slide 28 has the following examples of how WCAG 2.0 provides more
flexibility for design:     * WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint 7.1: Until user agents
allow users to control flickering, avoid causing the screen to flicker.
[Priority 1]WCAG 2.0 allows more movement within defined parameters   *
WCAG 1.0 Checkpoint 13.6: Group related links, identify the group (for
user agents), and, until user agents do so, provide a way to bypass the
group. [Priority 3]WCAG 2.0 allows more flexibility in meeting the
corresponding success criteria: Bypass Blocks: A mechanism is available to
bypass blocks of content that are repeated on multiple Web pages      Are
these good examples? Are they clear and strong? Please rate each from the
drop-down list.  What would be another clear, strong example? Please put
it in the Comments field.  

 * Checkpoint 7.1 -- WCAG 2.0 allows more movement: [ No opinion ] 
 * Checkpoint 13.6 -- WCAG 2.0 lists more techniques : [ No opinion ] 

Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 





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SKIP THIS OLD QUESTION [Example of WCAG 1.0 user agent clause that's no
longer an issue]
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For Slide 35 we want to give an example or two of things that were
required in WCAG 1.0 that are no longer issues due to developments in
technologies. Ideas:     * 1.5 Until user agents render text equivalents
for client-side image map links, provide redundant text links for each
active region of a client-side image map.   *   10.4 Until user agents
handle empty controls correctly, include default, place-holding characters
in edit boxes and text areas.   *   10.5 Until user agents (including
assistive technologies) render adjacent links distinctly, include
non-link, printable characters (surrounded by spaces) between adjacent
links.        Are these good examples? Are they clear and strong? Please
rate each from the drop-down list.  What would be another clear, strong
example? Please put it in the Comments field.  

 * 1.5 Until user agents render text equivalents for client-side image map
links...: [ No opinion ] 
 * 10.4 Until user agents handle empty controls correctly...: [ No opinion
] 
 * 10.5 Until user agents (including assistive technologies) render
adjacent links distinctly...: [ No opinion ] 

Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 



These answers were last modified on 4 September 2007 at 12:25:15 U.T.C.
by Liam McGee

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/wcag20pres-easy1/ until 2007-09-05.

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Received on Tuesday, 4 September 2007 12:32:05 UTC