wai flyer

-------- Original Message --------
Subject: Re: EOWG: Agenda for 20 October 2006 Teleconference
Date: Wed, 18 Oct 2006 06:09:10 -0700
From: William Loughborough <love26@gorge.net>
Reply-To: love26@gorge.net
Organization: Loveland Acres
To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
CC: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
References: <45361F07.3040806@w3.org>

Shawn Henry wrote:

> 1. WAI Flyer
> - Brief review of final version of front page content, to be updated at:
>     http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/flyerfront3.en.html

"...(WAI) pursues accessibility solutions..." is very nice but I wonder 
if we might consider going beyond mere "pursuit" to "provides"?

"Developing resources for education and outreach" could use a more 
proactive stance because a major activity goes beyond "developing" said 
resources to disseminating and almost proselytizing for them. Perhaps 
just "Developing/distributing information resources..."?

Love.