[wbs] response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Improving the Accessibility of Your Web Site, 2006 March'

Here are the answers submitted to 'EOWG Call for Review: Improving the
Accessibility of Your Web Site, 2006 March' (Education and Outreach
Working Group) for Barry McMullin.



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Support for Improving the Accessibility of Your Web Site
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 * ( ) I accept this version of the document as is
 * (x) I accept this version of the document, and suggest changes below
 * ( ) I accept this version of the document only with the changes below
 * ( ) I do not accept this version of the document because of the
comments below
 * ( ) I abstain (not vote)





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Comments
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Comments on the document, formatted as described above.
 
* priority: editor's discretion
* location: Introduction, para 1, last sentence.
* current wording: "... other Web standards ..."
* suggested revision: "... Web standards ..."
* rationale: No other "standards" have yet been mentioned, so the
  interpretation of "other" is obscure or even confusing.


* priority: required for this version
* location: Setting the Target, para 1, sentence 1.
* current wording: "WCAG"
* suggested revision: ?
* rationale: Broken link?


* priority: required for this version
* location: Evaluation and Repair Tools, para 1, last sentence.
* current wording: "HTML Tidy"
* suggested revision: ?
* rationale: Broken link? I guess already marked for attention:
    <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/retrofit/@@>




These answers were last modified on 14 March 2006 at 10:10:52 U.T.C.
by Barry McMullin

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/retro1-2006/ until 2006-03-16.

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