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implemented minor changes to Business Case Resource Suite

From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 15 Aug 2005 10:49:52 -0500
Message-ID: <4300B9A0.1050806@w3.org>
To: barry.mcmullin@dcu.ie, "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org

Hi, Barry,

Thanks for reviewing the business case and completing the Call for Review. I implemented both of your suggestions described below:
	1. in navigation, changed "Business Case" to "Business Case: Overview"
	2. fixed typo
and recorded them in the changelog at:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/changelog#changes

Best,
~ Shawn


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Overview page
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1. Navigation within suite/wording change

* priority: [editor's discretion]

* location: Site/suite navigation panel, left column. (Repeat in all pages
in suite.)

* current wording: "Business Case"

* suggested revision: "Business Case: Overview"

* rationale: Early in my review I had navigated into one of the
  specific pages of the suite and wanted to get back to the
  overview (where I had started).  I could use my browser back
  button, but that would not be effective for somebody who
  arrived via direct link (e.g., via search engine). It was not
  obvious to me that this first relevant item in the nav panel
  was the link I wanted (or, indeed, was a link...). The proposed
  revision is still brief, and consistent with the title element
  in the target page.

SLH: done

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Social Factors page

1. Wording change

* priority: [suggested]

* location: Social Factors in Developing a Web Accessibility
Business Case for Your Organization, "Barriers to Web Use"
section (http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/soc.html), third
paragraph, fourth sentence

* current wording: "The United Nations "Human Functioning and Disability"
page
  includes links to data for different contrives."

* suggested revision: "... countries."

* rationale: typo

SLH: fixed
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