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[wbs] Barry McMullin response to 'EOWG Call for Review: Business Case Resource Suite'

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Here are the answers submitted to 'EOWG Call for Review: Business Case
Resource Suite' (Education and Outreach Working Group) for Barry McMullin.



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Support for the Resource Suite
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I:



 * ( ) accept the resource suite as is
 * (x) accept the resource suite, suggest changes below
 * ( ) accept the resource suite only with the changes below
 * ( ) do not accept the resource suite because of the comments below
 * ( ) abstain (not vote)





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Overview page
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Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
1. Navigation within suite/wording change

* priority: [editor's discretion]

* location: Site/suite navigation panel, left column. (Repeat in all pages
in suite.)

* current wording: "Business Case"

* suggested revision: "Business Case: Overview"

* rationale: Early in my review I had navigated into one of the
  specific pages of the suite and wanted to get back to the
  overview (where I had started).  I could use my browser back
  button, but that would not be effective for somebody who
  arrived via direct link (e.g., via search engine). It was not
  obvious to me that this first relevant item in the nav panel
  was the link I wanted (or, indeed, was a link...). The proposed
  revision is still brief, and consistent with the title element
  in the target page.





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Social Factors page
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Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 
1. Wording change

* priority: [suggested]

* location: Social Factors in Developing a Web Accessibility
Business Case for Your Organization, "Barriers to Web Use"
section (http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/soc.html), third
paragraph, fourth sentence

* current wording: "The United Nations "Human Functioning and Disability"
page
  includes links to data for different contrives."

* suggested revision: "... countries."

* rationale: typo





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Technical Factors page
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Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 





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Financial Factors page
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Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 





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Legal and Policy Factors page
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Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 





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General comments on the resource suite as a whole
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Comments (or a URI pointing to your comments): 



These answers were last modified on 14 August 2005 at 20:19:23 E.S.T.
by Barry McMullin

Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/bcase1/ until 2005-08-17.

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