Re: Privacy note for time out SC

​Small grammar nits friendly amendment

Current proposal:
Privacy regulations may exclude preservation of user data until explicit
user consent has been obtained and user identification has been
authenticated. In case where the user is a minor, explicit consent may not
be obtained in most jurisdictions. Consultation with privacy professionals
and legal counsels is advised when considering data preservation as an
option to approach this success criterion.

​Amended proposal:
Privacy regulations may require explicit user consent before user
identification has been authenticated and before user data is preserved. In
cases where the user is a minor, explicit consent may not be solicited in
most jurisdictions. Consultation with privacy professionals and legal
advisors is advised when considering data preservation as an option to
conform to this success criterion.

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On Wed, Aug 16, 2017 at 10:32 AM, Alex Li (CELA) <alli@microsoft.com> wrote:

> + WG for final review
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Michael Cooper [mailto:cooper@w3.org]
> Sent: Wednesday, August 16, 2017 7:27 AM
> To: Alex Li (CELA) <alli@microsoft.com>; 'Andrew Kirkpatrick' <
> akirkpat@adobe.com>; lisa.seeman <lisa.seeman@zoho.com>
> Subject: Re: Privacy note for time out SC
>
> Hi - this seems fine to me on initial review. I think the plan was to put
> it on the group mailing list to flush out concerns before we start the CfC,
> so think that's the next step. Michael
>
>
> On 15/08/2017 7:27 PM, Alex Li (CELA) wrote:
> > My action item today is write a note about privacy for the data
> preservation portion of the SC. Please see below text. Editorial
> suggestions are welcomed.
> >
> > Privacy regulations may exclude preservation of user data until explicit
> user consent has been obtained and user identification has been
> authenticated. In case where the user is a minor, explicit consent may not
> be obtained in most jurisdictions. Consultation with privacy professionals
> and legal counsels is advised when considering data preservation as an
> option to approach this success criterion.
> >
> > All best,
> > Alex Li
> > Corporate Standards Group
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