http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-WCAG20-20020822/ Checkpoint 1.2 * In item 1, "of all visual information" should be "for all visual information". * I feel that the single list item under item 1 is much too long and, with all the parenthetical phrases, too complex. * In item 2, is "time-insensitive" better than "not time-sensitive". * Is the second "if" necessary? * Should the exception for item 6 be part of item 6 like it is with item 2? * How about example broadcast accessibility guideline documents? * Why is "Audio" capitalized in item 2 of Level 2? * If something is live, are the captions and audio descriptions supposed to be realtime? That does not seem very feasible. Also, please define "professionally produced". * In item 3, there should be a comma after "interactive". * In item 3, how do "captions with the audio" and "both together" differ? * In item 1 of level 3, "script" should be avoided since it could be confused with the <script> element and scripts in general. Perhaps "transcript" is a better term to use in its place. * What exactly are the difference between item 2 in level 2 and level 3? They seem pretty similar to me. * In the first definition, is it better to put "OR" in <strong> than to capitalize it? * Wouldn't the definitions make more sense as a definition list <dl>? -- Brant Langer Gurganus http://troop545.cjb.net/brant.htm
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