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Re: New draft - 14 August 2001

From: Loretta Guarino Reid <lguarino@adobe.com>
Date: Wed, 15 Aug 2001 15:57:00 -0700
Message-Id: <200108152257.PAA27893@patagonia>
To: Wendy A Chisholm <wendy@w3.org>
cc: w3c-wai-gl@w3.org

Minor nits:

Top layer, first sentence, I nearly missed the "4" before Guidelines. (I think 
I need new glasses!) Could we spell it out "four"?

In the User Needs section, the first example is missing "to" between "want" 
and "see".

Checkpoint 1.3 benefits still refers to the "scenes in a play" example that 
was removed.

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