I think the "Mission Statement" should say something like: "The WCAG are the cornerstone of the WAI effort and provide the basis on which all the other Recommendations depend: AU, UA, and ER." although it's heavily addressed in section 9, might deserve up-frontness? 2.2 "documented in the Techniques document" might enjoy a better verb. 4 Deliverables #s 3 and 4 are implicitly contained or necessary for #2 to have happened so might be better included in #2. Still think 5 is UA job - let's avoid a "jurisdictional dispute"? 8 might also be considered an integral/indespensible part of 2? 7. Schedule has "Working Drafts are available to the public, but a call for public review has not been issued." something grammatically grating? 9.1 "Once PF has identified or worked through an accessibility barrier with a group, we need to update our deliverables as accordingly." grammar? -- Love. ACCESSIBILITY IS RIGHT - NOT PRIVILEGE http://dicomp.pair.comReceived on Thursday, 23 December 1999 09:26:00 GMT
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