Re: EOWG - Eval Video draft for review this week

Dear all,

I agree that the overall looks really nice.
I just have the following comments to share with you.

BACKGROUND MUSIC:
I like the sound track but for me the sound level of the music is too loud and interfers with the speaker’s voice. Having a lower level would be more pleasant.

ANIMATION
I like the overall animation concept but I have problems with the different font type or formating and lenght and segmentation of the text in the boxes:

FONT TYPE

Font type for the text in the boxes and text on the images is different. It might be me but it seems that the text on the images is narrower than in the boxes.

TEXT IN THE BOXES:

1.- Easy Checks –
A First Review of Web Accessibility Evaluation Tools
(I would delay the dash at the end of the first sentence)

2.- List of Web Accessibility Evaluation Tools
(I would maybe separate the word List and include it in the animation)

3.- Selecting Web Accessibility Evaluation Tools
(I would maybe separate the word Selecting and include it in the animation)

4.- Website Accessibility Conformance
Evaluation Methodology – WCAG-EM
(I would separate the acronym WCAG-EM and include it as an animation in the form of a stamp, just an idea)

5.- WCAG-EM Report Tool
(Ok)

6.- Involving Users in Web Projects for Better,
Easier Accessibility
(I would segment the text:
Involving Users in Web Projects
for Better, Easier Accessibility)

7.- Involving Users in Evaluating Web Accessibility
(I would segment the text:
Involving Users
in Evaluating Web Accessibility)

Looking forward to the meeting in an hour.

Best,

Estel·la Oncins Noguer
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De: dmontalvo@w3.org <dmontalvo@w3.org>
Enviat el: divendres, 25 d’octubre de 2019 10:51
Per a: 'Education and Outreach Working Group' <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Tema: RE: EOWG - Eval Video draft for review this week

Hey all,

I really like how it all sounds, overall content is easy to understand and comes through really well. A Couple of minor comments:

* Music: I think we should replace the current track. There are in my opinion other better sounding tracks in the suggestions that we have. I especially like the one named "Sign-Forever".
* For sequences 11-12 -- It is hard, in my opinion, to understand that "Involving Users in Web Projects for Better, Easier Accessibility" and "Involving Users in Evaluating Web Accessibility" are actual WAI resources. I know we are already beyond the script editing phase, and probably this should have been raised before but it is when listening to the whole piece that it has called my attention. Maybe changing "WAI provides" to something more active from the watcher's perspective such as "You can check" or something along those lines can help understand that these materials are actually something you might want to check by yourself in addition to the videos.
* From a complete blind person's perspective, I think we should make reference to the fact that there is animations in the videos. Not describing them In detail but just indicating they exist. You cannot imply that when you listen to it, so maybe references to such animations in the surrounding text of the video page or a single sentence at the beginning of the videos could be a solution.

Best.






> -----Original Message-----
> From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
> Sent: Wednesday, October 23, 2019 1:50 AM
> To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
> Subject: EOWG - Eval Video draft for review this week
>
> Hi active EOWG participants,
>
> We have a draft of the first evaluation intro video! This link will download it:
>         <http://regiepapst.powercontrolcenter.de/getFile.php?id=8d23b4cc>
>
> Please review it and prepare for discussion this Friday &/or send comments to
> the main EOWG list:
>        w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
>
> Pretty much everything is ready for comment. Specifically*:
> * Script -- approval to publish already done -- We're assuming the script is set.
> However, if there are important minor edits, we can still do those now.
> * Animation -- Monkey Review -- Comment on all aspects of the animation.
> * Voice-over and sound effects -- Eagle Review -- Voice is concept draft. Will get
> professional voice-over later. (Not sure what sound effects are planned?)
> * Background music -- Dragonfly Review -- comment on the track in this video
> and alternative tracks in a zip file that downloads from:
>        <http://regiepapst.powercontrolcenter.de/getFile.php?id=9af60f7e>
>
> Looking forward to the discussion. :)
>
> Best,
> ~Shawn for Shadi & Sharron & Brent
>
> * "animal handles" for EOWG reviews are described under "Review Stages and
> Levels" at:
>        https://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/EOWG_Participation_Info#Review_
> Stages_and_Levels