Review by Thursday 28 October: How People with Disabilities Use the Web

EOWG,

How People with Disabilities Use the Web is updated at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/

Please complete the survey at http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/HPWDUW-2010Oct/ *by Thursday 28 October*.

We would particularly like comments on the following::
- How do the page titles and individual section headings work?
- Are there too many or too few cross-references between the sections?
- Are the section contents clear and informative?
- Is there too much repetition between the sections?
- Are there too many or too few examples listed after the sections?

NOTE: Please send copyediting and minor comments that do not need EOWG review to wai-eo-editors@w3.org instead of putting them in the survey.

Thanks,
~Shawn & Shadi


-------- Original Message --------
Subject: Ready for Review: How People with Disabilities Use the Web
Date: Mon, 11 Oct 2010 16:58:24 -0500
From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
CC: WAI-AGE Taskforce <public-wai-age@w3.org>

EOWG,

How People with Disabilities Use the Web is ready for your review from: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/

It is mostly complete, although there are a some things still to be edited, such as the section on speech disabilities, the introductory paragraphs of each page, and the cross-linking.

The Understanding Web Browsing page is significantly edited at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/2009/browsing

We would particularly like comments on:
* Content of Understanding Web Browsing page
* Content of Understanding Web Users page
* Page titles, especially Ensuring Accessibility

Feel free to send comments to the list now, and we will discuss more at the teleconference this week.

Thanks,
~Shawn & Shadi



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Shawn Lawton Henry
W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
e-mail: shawn@w3.org
phone: +1.617.395.7664
about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/

Received on Tuesday, 19 October 2010 01:10:25 UTC