- From: Alan Chuter <achuter@technosite.es>
- Date: Fri, 04 Sep 2009 13:06:46 +0200
- To: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Under "What: Examples of Web Accessibility" I think that the intro paragraph is perhaps redundant (this is already described above). It might be better to say that web accessibility is very diverse and cover sensory aspects (sight, hearing), input and output devices, and understandability. Under "Alternative Text for Images" the first sentence "Alt text is the classic example" uses the jargon "alt text" without explanation. Maybe it could be punt in quotes to indicate that people are not expected to be familiar with it. In the third paragraph "When equivalent alt text is provided, the information is available to everyone, including..." is very long and could be split up into "When equivalent alt text is provided, the information is available to all users. These include..." The images and placeholders right and left make this section visually confusing for me. -- Alan Chuter Departamento de Usabilidad y Accesibilidad Consultor Technosite - Grupo Fundosa Fundación ONCE Tfno.: 91 121 03 30 Fax: 91 375 70 51 achuter@technosite.es http://www.technosite.es
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