For 3 Oct: Minor edits to WCAG 2.0 at a Glance

EOWG,

We received the following suggestions for WCAG 2.0 at a Glance <http://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG20/glance/>:

1. add a comma in:
Make information adaptable, and available to assistive technologies.

2. don't bold the "and"s in:
a. Provide captions and alternatives for audio and video content.
   Provide <strong>captions and alternatives</strong> for audio and video content.
b. Make information adaptable and available to assistive technologies.
   Make information <strong>adaptable and available</strong> to assistive technologies.
or Make information adaptable, and available to assistive technologies.
   Make information <strong>adaptable, and available</strong> to assistive technologies.
c. Help users navigate and find content.
   Help users <strong>navigate and find</strong> content.
d. Make text readable and understandable.
   Make text <strong>readable and understandable</strong>.
e. Help users avoid and correct mistakes.
   Help users <strong>avoid and correct mistakes</strong>.

Please send your comments on these suggestions to the EOWG mailing list before the teleconference.

Regards,
~Shawn


Shawn Lawton Henry
W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
e-mail: shawn@w3.org
phone: +1.617.253.8788
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