Shared Web Experiences - review comments

EOWG and Yeliz,

I've just finished another thorough read-through of the "Shared Web Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device Users and People with Disabilities" document at <http://www.w3.org/WAI/mobile/experiences-new-format>

It's looking very good!

I have noted a few suggestions for additions and requests for clarification -- for editor consideration and EOWG discussion where needed -- in a draft at <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/MWBP-WCAG/experiences-SLH.html>

Reminder: The Shared Web Experiences document is the main topic on the agenda for this week, 15 August, and this week may be the last EOWG discussion of it before the completed version is published.

Regards,
~Shawn

Received on Wednesday, 13 August 2008 21:34:53 UTC