- From: Sylvie duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Thu, 24 Jul 2008 12:42:48 +0200
- To: Yeliz Yesilada <yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk>
- Cc: Andrew Arch <andrew@w3.org>, Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>, EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
hello Yeliz and all, I like your title very much. It's clear, gives a good summary and no too long! Best Sylvie Yeliz Yesilada a écrit : > > It would be good to have "barriers" in the title to precisely define the > scope of this document so what about this one: > > *Shared Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device Users and People > with Disabilities* > > Advantages: > - It has "shared experiences" in the title; > - It has "barriers" in the title so it clearly defines the scope > - It does not give the impression that we are talking about the > experiences of people with disabilities using mobile devices. > > Yeliz. > > On 24 Jul 2008, at 10:03, Andrew Arch wrote: > >> >> Hi, >> >> Trying to get the 'shared experiences' bit in, as well as specifying >> it the Web, and who the two groups are, how about returning to sort of >> where we started: >> >> Shared Web Experiences: Mobile Device Users and People with Disabilities >> or >> Shared Experiences: Mobile Web Users and People with Disabilities >> >> Or is it still too long? >> >> Cheers, Andrew >> >> Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote: >>> Hi Wayne, all, >>> Wayne Dick wrote: >>>> I like the long titles for their descriptive value, but the length >>>> is a problem. I tend to lose the middle of long words and >>>> sentences. So, I'm thinking we must cut the length even if >>>> descriptive precision is lost. >>>> Maybe something new like: >>>> >>>> Mobile Device Use: A self imposed disability >>> There are several issues with this title in my opinion: >>> #1. it suggests that the document is about the use of mobile devices >>> #2. it does not reflect the main aspect of shared user experiences >>> #3. it implicitly equates using mobile devices to having a disability >>> I think the use of the colon is useful though, it provides a short >>> name and a slightly longer explanation (as Sylvie had also suggested). >>> Regards, >>> Shadi >> >> -- >> Andrew Arch >> Web Accessibility and Ageing Specialist >> W3C/ERCIM, Sophia Antipolis, France >> Ph +33 (0)4 92 38 79 46 >> www.w3.org/WAI/WAI-AGE/ >> > > > >
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