Hello all,

I am attaching my comments on the WCAG 2.0 guidelines in the spirit of thorough review.  Some of the comments are likely to be wrong, based on my incomplete understanding of the intent, but I was fairly ruthless in my pursuit of plain language.  And frankly I couldn't always find a plain language solution.

Please understand that I have no attachment to these changes, and please forgive the number of them that I am submitting.  It is only one opinion from a person who likes things to be as straightforward as possible.  As Shawn can attest from our informal survey of developers at the SXSW Interactive media conference here in Austin in March, the wish for plain language is shared by most (if not all) of those we queried.

That said, I may have reduced the statements beyond plain in a few cases.  Don't hesitate to reject these suggestions and thank you for considering them.

Best,
Sharron

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