Judy Brewer wrote: > take a look and let me know if this addresses the concerns raised today. Paragraph 2, sentence 1 says "...encourages [should be "encourage" for grammar]" while the next sentence are "...would improve..." and "...would help". The first verb is wussy and the next two are forthright. Our recommendations are, of course, *correct*! I would describe the tone of this as "brassier", and that's a good thing. Love.Received on Saturday, 18 March 2006 03:39:56 GMT
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