feedback on eval/template.html

Hello,

I recently conducted a review of a municipal web site using the 
evaluation template at http://www.w3.org/WAI/eval/template.html. I found 
it to be immensely useful in setting up the basic structure of my 
document, and have some feedback as well.

My final document ended up with the following headings:

Executive Summary	
Background	
About The Evaluation	
	Web Site Reviewed	
	Reviewer	
	Review Process	
Results and Recommended Actions	
	Priorities for Improving Site Accessibility	
	Accessibility Features	
	Summary of Checkpoints Met	
	Detailed Results For Checkpoints Not Met
	General Recommendations
Recommended Next Steps
Additional Resources
	Provincial (Ontario) Resources
	Federal (Canada) Resources
	W3C Resources and Automated Testing Suites


Breaking down the results into "checkpoints met" and "checkpoints not 
met" was really helpful for my client. I'm not sure if that was the 
intention of the original template with respect to Accessibility 
Features vs. Detailed Results. If it was the intention, the language in 
that section could be clarified to make it more obvious.

regards,
emma

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Emma Jane Hogbin, B.Sc.
Founder, xtrinsic
phone: (519) 371-2665
web: www.xtrinsic.com