- From: Sailesh Panchang <sailesh.panchang@deque.com>
- Date: Wed, 8 Mar 2006 14:53:08 -0500
- To: "'EOWG'" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Judy, Following for your consideration: 1. Under Abstract consider including something along the lines of : ... and calls for wider (or greater) participation and cooperation for developing a single set of standards. The above will kind of summarize the action steps. 2. Editorial comment: In the first sentence uner Overview, should semicolons be replaced with commas? Or present the items in a list? Same comment applies to Action Steps. 3. I suppose Consequences (h2 heading) is part of Current situation (which is also h2). For clarity, better to say Consequences of fragmentation? 4. After stating what is meant by fragmentation upfront under overview, it may be better to drop the words "Different types of modifications" under current situation and begin directly with "Fragmentation of Web accessibility guidelines" === Ref: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/standard-harmon-20060301.html Thanks, Sailesh Panchang Deque Systems Tel 703-225-0380 ext 105
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