Re: tweaked wording

I agree with Liam's comments [1] referring to your message [2].

The first change doesn't seem to detract from the humour too much. But the  
changes do seem to be going beyond what is reasonable in catering to all  
possible sensitivities. I don't think that the content actually satirises  
anyone. I would vote to leave it as is.

best regards,

-- 
Alan Chuter
Accessibility Consultant,
Technosite (formerly Fundosa Teleservicios),
Madrid, Spain.
achuter@technosite.es

[1]  
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-wai-eo-badtf/2006Mar/0016.html
[2]  
http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-wai-eo-badtf/2006Mar/0015.html