Intro to: Notes on Accessibility Features of W3C Technologies (2)

Introduction to Notes on Accessibility Features of W3C Technologies
Version: Early Rough Draft 2004.07.14
[ http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/sketchpad/techs-intro ]

2nd issue.

1. The current wording

2. Concerns with the current wording
The tone of this document is different from the other two (Intro to 
Overview Slides, Intro to WCAG).  I mention this as a concern only if the 
WG is aiming for a close consistency of tone across the intro document 
suite.  The subject matter of this page is more technical than the others 
and the tone may be appropriate.
3. Suggestions for revision
None.  I don't have a feel for how strongly the WG wants consistency of 
tone maintained.  This will always be a challenge when different editors 
are making contributions.

Chuck Letourneau
Starling Access Services