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Re: Business Benefits

From: Carlos A Velasco <Carlos.Velasco-Nunez@gmd.de>
Date: Fri, 27 Jul 2001 20:51:14 +0200
Message-ID: <3B61B822.6070403@gmd.de>
To: Andrew Arch <amja@optushome.com.au>
Cc: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Andrew, all,

This is my homework (ignoring spelling errors <grin>). Actually these 
are my 2 cents, so disregard whatever you feel to.

A general comment is that you mention all over the place "a master 
stylesheet", when the reality is that there are more than one, 
specially for huge websites. I would suggest to change that to plural.

* Section 1:
1st paragraph: last sentence "Web apps", I would say "web content".
2nd paragraph: "technical workings of your Web applications" should be 
changed to "performance of your web services".

* Section 2-"Improve usability for non-disabled visitors":
Item: "Clear and consistent navigation", first element. I would add a 
third element on the list of kicking-off factors: "a home page only 
browsable through third-party plug-ins"

Item: "Device independence because of situational usage", I would say 
"Device independence"

* Section 2-"Support for Low Literacy Levels":
1st paragraph: "the language of your website is not their first", 
shall say "the language of your website is not their mother tongue".

1st Table:

I think there should be a "YES" in the crossing of "Device 
Independence" and "Low Bandwidth".

That's all. I hope it helps.

Regards,
carlos

Andrew Arch wrote:

> A new (complete?) version of this appendix is now available from the usual
> place (http://members.optushome.com.au/amja/wai/).
> 
> This version picks up all the recent discussion and contributions (thanks to
> those who did email me with suggestions). The final links from the tables
> have not been incorporated (nor have the linear tables been generated) -
> this will be done after the content is 'signed off' as ready for public
> comment.


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