I've put up a new Editor's draft with a proposed reworking of the Introduction and Conclusion that may address Tim's comments: http://www.w3.org/WAI/AU/2007/WD-ATAG20-20070821/WD-ATAG20-20070821.html The draft also includes some work I've done for my action items: 1. Worked on the "assistive technology" / "direct accessibility" / "mainstream technology" terminology grouping 2. Worked on the "authoring action" / "authoring outcome" / "authoring practice" terminology grouping (this is the one I have an action to write an intro for, but hopefully the rewording has made things more clear) 3. Also what do people think of saying that a Web Content Technology has a Web Content Accessibility "Benchmark" Document it is: "accessibility BENCHMARKED"? this concept would then be worded so that it is is compatible with WCAG's: a Web content Technology is "accessibility supported". Cheers, JanReceived on Tuesday, 21 August 2007 15:48:33 GMT
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